Layout was great. New fighter rules look fun and engaging (and adaptable so when I get around to kitbashing Crimsion skies and fate using this) chracter creation easy and again adaptable. World is basically open with a few settings but no major spoiler arcs so you can make it whatever story you want. (its basically a supported "mercenery" unit like the Flying tigers in Earth history but if you want to do more hard mercenery (piolt has to pay for repairs consumables himself) Like Area 88 not much change is needed would have liked to see more about the enemies but cannot say it was really needed.only one other thing i thought was missing so I will put it here
An Irish Airman Foresees His Death
W. B. Yeats, 1865 - 1939
I know that I shall meet my fate
Somewhere among the clouds above;
Those that I fight I do not hate
Those that I guard I do not love;
My country is Kiltartan Cross,
My countrymen Kiltartan’s poor,
No likely end could bring them loss
Or leave them happier than before.
Nor law, nor duty bade me fight,
Nor public man, nor cheering crowds,
A lonely impulse of delight
Drove to this tumult in the clouds;
I balanced all, brought all to mind,
The years to come seemed waste of breath,
A waste of breath the years behind
In balance with this life, this death.
although in my head while reading this i kept changing it to "somewhere among the stars above"
[5 of 5 Stars!]