Nice story and development... Good puzzles. Excellent for new players... BUT... I can point some things that annoyed me:

1- At some poits have page link unfinished (p. XX)

2- Could describe the merits at characteres page

3- I missed a scratch of Deimos Energy Solutions plant with some interesting points

4- Bans and Banes Effects

And for Gods sake.... Translate your materials to Portuguese. We have a HUGE base @Brazil and we are still playing V:TM 3rd Edition just because we dont have material in our language.